Feedback for Rough Cuts!

Feedback for rough cuts for my Front Cover:

Teacher feedback:

Photoshop- Rough around the edges use the eraser tools.
VIP needs retyping.
Use more images and compare to style model for layout.

Feedback for rough cuts for my Contents Page:

Teacher feedback:

Needs more structure.
Check style model.
Add in more images.

Feedback for rough cuts for my Double Page Spread:

Teacher feedback:

Use three columns for text.
Use quote to break up text.
Write up introducing paragraph.

Pupil feedback for improvements:

Front cover could have a background.
More colour.
Could put page numbers in a different colour to make them stand out bit more.
Spend more time on images; maybe change the font of text.
Use more than one person for pictures.

Teacher and Pupil Feedback on what they like about my magazine:

Front cover and double page spread is good.
Good ideas and layouts.
Layout ideas are really good.
Images are well thought out; double page spread is well laid out.
Photos are useful and relevant.
Good layout on double page spread.
Beginning of a good brand and colour scheme throughout magazine.
Page numbers, magazine name and issue data on each page is good.